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Can someone verify if this is a good poem to turn in to my teacher?

My love is like an ocean it goes down so deep
My love is like a rose whose beauty you want to keep
My love is like a prisoner, it is trapped forever
My love is to you that I surrender

This is a quiz grade... so please be honest

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Wow!!!! That is awesome!!!

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I really like the similes and the rhymes. Great Work. Hope u have a great rest of the day!

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