The children were wearing party hats because they were
going to a party. They were bursting with excitement as
they walked in the door of the house where the party was.
Which of the following revisions best compresses the passage?
A. The children went in the door of the house where the party was,
wearing party hats.
B. The children burst with excitement as they walked through the
door of the house.
C. The children wore party hats because they were walking to a party
through a door.
D. The children walked through the door in their party hats, bursting
with excitement.