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As you read look for: metaphor, simile, onomatopoeia, personification, oxymoron and/or alliteration.

Like a detective, I searched the nursing home corridors until I saw him in a wheelchair by the open window. His eyes were pools of blue staring out at the first rays of sunshine tiptoeing through the garden. I brushed my fingers through his snow white hair and kissed his forehead. “Hi, Grandpa,” I said. There was a deafening silence as there was every morning. Time ticked by as I talked to him and told him about my week. It was a one-sided conversation. I often wished we had spoken more before he had poor health. I held his hand and hoped that he knew I was there.

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Answer:

like a detective--- SIMILE

pools of blue----- METAPHOR

sunshine tiptoeing through the garden ----PERSONIFICATION

snow white hair------METAPHOR

deafening silence -----OXYMORON

time ticked by-----PERSONIFICATION

one sided conversation----OXYMORON

held his hand-----ALLITERATION

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Answer:

like a detective--- SIMILE

pools of blue----- METAPHOR

sunshine tiptoeing through the garden ----PERSONIFICATION

snow white hair------METAPHOR

deafening silence -----OXYMORON

time ticked by-----PERSONIFICATION

one sided conversation----OXYMORON

held his hand-----ALLITERATION

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