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I need an honest opinion on my speech, even if its brutal (Id Ask my family but they wont tell me if its horrible or not...lol.

10 Points! I need an honest opinion on my speech, even if its brutal (Id Ask my family-example-1
10 Points! I need an honest opinion on my speech, even if its brutal (Id Ask my family-example-1
10 Points! I need an honest opinion on my speech, even if its brutal (Id Ask my family-example-2
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Answer:looks good sounds great just to many words that just make it seem long and words that just dont yneedto be added but if you are trying to get some one attention try using smaller but intristing words taht will make they want o listen

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