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Check the spelling of the three-paragraph descriptive essay below.

Check the spelling of the three-paragraph descriptive essay below.-example-1
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My family is very different than many others. I love my little sisters and my little brother,but they are not able to live with me. I love my mom and dad, but they are not able to live with me either. My grandma who i like to call "Granny" takes care of me and my older brother in a home we share with others.

Family is not always living under the same roof. it's not about saying goodnight to each other when the lights go out. It is about looking forward to the next time we can spend together. It's for remembering special times we've already shared before.

My family is like a garden full of brothers, sisters, Aunts, Uncles, cousins, teachers, preachers, and many others who care. It doesn't really matter if we are together or apart , i will always love my family in my heart.

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in first paragrph there is 3 mistake

in second paragraph there is 5 mistake

in third paragraph thete is 6 mistake

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