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What revisions do I make to the following sentence?

The adults open their huge ears to listen to the cries then they respond to the let the calf know that help is on the way.

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Answer:

The adults open their huge ears to listen to the cries, then they respond to the let the calf know that help is on the way.

Step-by-step explanation:

Add a comma between "cries" and "then"

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