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"It's so hard to be able to express how I felt about my only move so far, these mixed emotions seem to collide over one another as I had to pack." Is that a good sentence or is it confusing? I'm writing a memoir and I can't fail.

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its actually really good! <3

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the words flow together nicely and sound pretty