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can someone proof read this page about a quote from the love hypothesis??? and give any comments or things i should add to make it better. everything in green i may change or the wording is off

can someone proof read this page about a quote from the love hypothesis??? and give-example-1
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comma after tyically; don't use the part in the parenthesis, comma after other hand, adam never silently judged her?

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also don't use the word after the paretnthesis, i dont think you know what it means

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