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Re-write these sentences and add the commas. There are 4 commas missing.

She will enjoy swimming in our pond riding horses and picking berries for pies. My brother is afraid she will get bored on our farm but I think she will love it here. With all of the things mom and I have planned she won't have time to be bored.

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She will enjoy swimming in our pond, riding horses, and picking berries for pies. My brother is afraid she will get bored on our farm, but I think she will love it here. With all of the things mom and I have planned, she won't have time to be bored.

Explanation: Commas separate items in a series. Also, use a comma before a coordinating conjunction, and use a comma after an introductory adverb, adverb phrase, or an adverb clause.

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She will enjoy swimming in our pond, riding horses and picking berries for pies. My brother is afraid, she will get bored on our farm but, I think she will love it here. With all of the things mom and I have planned, she won't have time to be bored.

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