Question

I come from a small island named Puerto Rico. When I was four years old, I came to the United States in 2006 due to my health problems. When I was young, my parents would work hard to provide the best care possible to me and my siblings. My parents went through many hardships even forgot about themselves to provide the best to us. At a young age, my parents have taught us to be grateful for what we have. This is what has inspired me to want to become a doctor so, that I would be able to make a priority those who help those who suffer from health problems.

Can someone make corrections, please? This will be 30 points.

Answer 1

I come from a small island named Puerto Rico. When I was four years old, I came to the United States in 2006 due to my health problems. When I was young, my parents would work hard to provide the best care possible to me and my siblings. My parents went through many hardships even forgot about themselves to provide the best to us. At a young age, my parents have taught us to be grateful for what we have. This is what has inspired me to want to become a doctor so, that I would be able to make a priority those who help those who suffer from health problems.

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I did not have to fix that much only but other than that its pretty good what u wrote.