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Ok sooo I'm doing a scary story contest for my school and this is the story so let me know what you think

Don't turn around
I was in the woods camping with a few of my friends, Eating smores and telling stories. My best friend, Allison, said she had to go to the bathroom, so she went into the woods. After 30 minutes, we started getting worried that something had happened to Allison, so one of my other friends, Emma, went to go check up on Allison. About 5 minutes later, we heard a bloodcurdling scream and then saw Allison coming back. "Where have you been?" I asked. "What are you talking about? I just went in the woods to use the bathroom." Allison replied. "Well, where is Emma?" I said. "What do you mean, I didn't see Emma?" Allison and I kept trying to figure out where Emma was when all my friends and I decided to go look for her. Everyone except, Allison. "I'm not going back in those woods, it gives me the creeps." said Allison "Ok fine, just stay in the tent with your phone on you," I replied." "Ok," said Allison. So my friends went into the woods looking for Emma. As we were looking for her, we found what looked to be a piece of yellow cloth, on a tree branch. I put it in my pocket and continued searching for Emma. After about an hour of calling Emma and trying to reach her on her phone, we stumbled across some sort of abandoned shack. When we got to the shack we realized 2 out of 6 of us were missing. We decided to split up in the shack and see if we could find our missing friends. We thought we had found nothing and were about to head back when we heard my friend, Malissa, scream. We ran into the room she was in to find nothing in there but a blood written letters on the wall which read: DON'T TURN AROUND...

I looked behind me to see that all my friends were gone

I ran out of the shack and back to the campsite, but when I got there, no one was there. The tents were all gone and the fire was burned out. I called out for Allison, but nothing. I reached into my pocket and look at the yellow cloth I had found earlier. I remembered that Allison was wearing a yellow sweater the same shade as the cloth and thought, maybe she ripped her sweater? But then I thought, when Allison came back, she was wearing a black sweater. So then who came back from the woods, and where was Allison?

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I love it! This is amazing!

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