Question

You are writing a story about a tornado hitting a high school

You have written the following sentence for your story, but you feel like it needs revision
The students rushed and hurried down the hall hearing the wind rattling the classroom windows
Which is the best revision of this sentence?
A)
The students walked down the hall; they could hear the wind howling.
B)
The students rushed and hurried because they could hear the wind
howling.
The students rushed down the hall, hearing the wind rattling the
classroom windows
The students rushed and hurried down the hall, hearing the wind rattling
the classroom windows.
D)

Answer 1

I believe the answer is C) The students rushed down the hall, hearing the wind rattling the classroom windows. (warning: i could be wrong! This is just what i think)

Step-by-step explanation:

I believe this because it is still descriptive but to me sounds better than "The students rushed and hurried down the halls, they mean the same thing right..? SO that's why i believe the answer is C. Hope this helps! :)