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What can I add to make this short poem better? Give any suggestions please~ thank you

What can I add to make this short poem better? Give any suggestions please~ thank you
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What can I add to make this short poem better? Give any suggestions please~ thank you

What can I add to make this short poem better? Give any suggestions please~ thank-example-1
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Answer:

You can add "Cuz' I'm what I'm" in the end.

Overall, the poem is good as it is.

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