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Ten years from now I will probably be in college or just graduating and on a road trip with my friend Kenzi. If I’m in college, I would be majoring in biological sciences or criminal justice. I want to either be a surgeon or FBI special agent. When I go on the road trip, instead of taking a couple of days to get where you're going and come back, Kenzie and I decided to make it last for at least a year so we could stop everywhere and see everything. Anyway, when we get back we will both already have our degrees so all we need to do is find a job. As for where we’re going to live, Kenzi wants to go somewhere out East but I wanna stay on the coast, so I don't know what's going to happen with that. This is the life I have planned for myself, To make sure this happens I’m going to need to make sure I go to college and get a high GPA and to get there I need good grades in high school. This year my goal is to get straight A´s and that goes for every year after as well.

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I corrected it for you.

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Ten years from now I will probably be in college graduating or on a road trip with my friend Kenzi. If I’m in college, I would be majoring in biological sciences, criminal justice, a surgeon, or FBI special agent. When I go on the road trip, instead of taking a couple of days to get where you're going and come back, Kenzie and I decided to make it last for at least a year so we could stop everywhere and see everything.

When get back we will both already have our degrees so all we need to do is find a job. As for where we’re going to live, Kenzi wants to go somewhere out East but I wanna stay on the coast. This is the life I have planned for myself, To make sure this happens I’m going to need to make sure I go to a good college and get a high GPA, to get there I am determined to get good grades. My goal this year is to get straight A's and that goes for every year after as well.

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Yea this is grammatically correct

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