This is definitely not the best short story, but i think so far it’s okay! Make some changes if you’d like and finish by adding another body paragraph or the conclusion.
I recommend adding a couple more small details about the mouse in the introduction but that’s up to you.
And i know the names are not creative, so feel free to change those as well.
I hope this is the kind of thing you’re looking for! If you’d like me to proofread it after you’re done, let me know :)
At the peak of the mountain, Mouse looked down at the ground. It seemed so far away, the bushes and flowers blurred into one purple and green blob. Mouse stood behind a boulder, looking around for a path down the mountain. There was none in sight and Mouse needed to get down-quickly. He heard Cat sniffing and scratching behind him. She was getting close to knowing where he was hiding.
Mouse had no more time to think, he just had to go. He started with a jog, then he ran, and soon he was sprinting towards the edge of the cliff! As he got closer, his nerves increased. His mind went blank as he whipped his head around to see Cat hissing in his face. What else was there to do except jump? He took a deep breath and let himself leap off the edge.
Mouse looked around and gasped. He was falling for only a few seconds before landing on something large and soft. All he saw was some kind of black feather or hair, it was hard to tell. Thinking of what could’ve happened, Mouse soon came to a realization. Could this be a bird? More specifically, could this be an eagle?