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Could someone edit this if it needs to be edited or revise it if anything needs to be revised? This is just my thesis

I completely agree that people in Texas should have to wear a mask whether they like it or not in public. I agree because, even though your beliefs are that you think you shouldn’t have to wear a masks you are putting others in danger because of your beliefs. I wear my mask mainly because it is a contagious virus, and its also a foreign virus that just came out of no where and we also dont have a lot of information about it.

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I completely agree that people in Texas should have to wear a mask whether they like it or not in public. I agree because, even though your beliefs are that you think you shouldn’t have to wear a mask, you are putting others in danger because of your beliefs. I wear my mask mainly because it is a contagious virus, and it's also a foreign virus that just came out of nowhere and we also don’t have a lot of information about it.

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I edited this the best I could.

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I edited just read it and write it

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I completely agree that people in Texas should have to wear a mask whether they like it or not in public. I agree because, even though your beliefs are that you think you shouldn’t have to wear a masks you are putting others in danger because of your beliefs. I wear my mask mainly because there is a contagious virus, and its also a foreign virus that just came out of no where and we also don't have a lot of information about it.

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