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The fake, counterfeit money, which isn't valid, was discovered in the crime investigation.

What is the best way to revise this sentence to eliminate wordiness?
The money is not valid because it was counterfeit and discovered in the crime investigation.
The counterfeit money was discovered in the crime investigation.
Discovered in the crime investigation, the counterfeit money was fake.
The sentence is correct as written.

User Raghavan
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Answer:

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User EnigmaCurry
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There's got to be a better way of explaining counterfeit than with 2 claims of not real.

I personally would pick

The counterfeit money was discovered in the crime investigation. Most people would know what that meant, I think.

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