Question

Please help me if you can!

I’m writing a memoir I just need to know if this simile makes sense. If not please give me a better one :) !

“Good morning Devy, hang up your bookbag and have a seat.” Mrs. Jane said. Her tone always soft enough to lay on making us feel at home.


^^^ the last sentence is the simile. I just need some sort of good figurative language there because this is going to be restated as an ironic statement at the end of the story.

Answer 1

the simile makes sense, i see where your going with it. a better sentence that you could usewould probably be: "her voice/tone was always soft which made us feel comfortable like we were at home."