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I saw two birds land on the roof of our porch. One bird had a twig in its beak. The other bird had a piece of string.

Which sentence could be added to the passage to best vary the sentence pattern and affect the fluency?


I think they were a male and female robin. Pls Hurry and tell me

Then they flew to the corner of the porch.

I sat quietly and watched as they began to build a nest.

Without a care, the little carpenters got to work on a nest.

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Answer:

D

Step-by-step explanation:

I took the test

User Manu R S
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Answer:

I think the best answer would be the last one "Without a care..."

Step-by-step explanation:

It breaks up the pattern of describing the birds and using first-person POV. the other options are repetitive and uninteresting

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