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ok can someone tell me if this is a good thesis statement. "Video games have many great effects on our everyday lives, although the negative effects have people questioning them" i feel like its too bland

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I think it’s good.

Although there are many cognitive benefits of playing video games the negative impact they have on the human mind causes people to question if they really hold the capability to be beneficial.
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