Question

Correct this 2nd grade paragraph to include more description. My grandma picks me up after school. She takes care of me while my parents are at work. Grandma is always interested in my homework.

Answer 1

(I know this is old but I still wanted to do it)

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My grandma takes care of me while my parents are working. She picks me up from school and she's always involved in my homework.

Answer 2

My grandma often picks me up from school. She is the one who takes care of me when my parents are working. My grandma seems to always be interested in my homework.

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