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The crowd cheered when Ben intercepted the quarterback's badly aimed pass, then the fans threw popcorn boxes as Ben rushed into the wrong end zone, scoring a touchdown for the op ing team.

O ... pass, but then..

O pass; but, then..

O pass, however, then..

O No change is necessary.

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This question is incomplete. Here's the complete question.

The crowd cheered when Ben intercepted the quarterback’s badly aimed pass, then the fans threw half-eaten hot dogs and popcorn boxes as Ben rushed into the wrong end zone, scoring a touchdown for the Boone High Braves, the opposing team.

A. ... pass, but then ...

B. ... pass; but, then ...

C. ... pass, however, then ...

D. No change is necessary.

Answer: B. ... pass; but, then ...

Step-by-step explanation:

In this example, we have two independent clauses (simple sentences) put together into a compound sentence; however, since the second one is in contrast with the first one (although Ben was cheered at first, he gets stuff thrown at him later) the appropriate coordinating conjunctions should be a semicolon followed by "but, then".

The correct sentence would be:

The crowd cheered when Ben intercepted the quarterback’s badly aimed pass; but, then the fans threw half-eaten hot dogs and popcorn boxes as Ben rushed into the wrong end zone, scoring a touchdown for the Boone High Braves, the opposing team.

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