Question

will somebody please write me an essay. I got my phone taken away last week because I was cursing. I really want my phone back and my mom said she wanted an essay on why I think I deserve it back, with good points, grammar ,and punctuation. side note: I think I deserve it back because I have been good and my mom told me not to call or text anybody from it because I c ant be home alone without it and I listened. I have been good and doing my school work and what she has told me to do.

Answer 1

Why I should get my phone back.

First of all, Mother, I am extremely sorry for cursing, and I will never do it again, it was a horrendous idea and I was not being intelligent at all. Now the reasons I believe I deserve to get my phone back. First, I have been exceptional and not cursing. I have not said a single curse word since I have gotten my phone taken away, and plan on never saying another one. I have learned my lesson about not swearing. Another reason I should get my phone back is that I have been listening to you you said. I have not texted or called anyone while I have been home alone, nor did I even think about it. Finally, I should get my phone back because I have been doing my school work also. I have finished all of my work, and I sincerely believe I have done well on them. I hope this essay has persuaded you.

Answer 2

I know i have done something indecent, but i have repented and tried to be in my best behavior, nor have i went against your order to text or call someone.I have also been doing my school work nowadays and I've also done what i have been told to do. I apologize for my foul mouth and hope to not repeat my mistake, so don't you think i deserve my phone back now?