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Hello, my name is Kaylah Jade. I was wondering if you could please check my grammar. Please Review It!

Hello, my name is Kaylah Jade. I was wondering if you could please check my grammar-example-1
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Answer: Everything is great but when you said " I would take a bullet for them so even though Im a teen".

Take out "So"

I love how you are talking about yourself with your kids even though you were young, I bet a lot of girls and Ladies would understand like I do. I believe women can do anything and I hope you and your girls are doing great. :>

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They are all girls. Their names are Artemis, Atlanta, and Angelynn...

I have always had a good relationship with my kids. They are...

I would take a bullet for them. Even though I'm a teen mom- well technically, I was probably more challenged because I was a child-mom- I'm a teen mom and after...

Even thought it will be weird at first, you will...

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