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Replace the noun with the correct pronouns

1 . when the daughter performed the daughter's playing was sloppy.​

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Answer:

When the daughter performed, her playing was sloppy.

Step-by-step explanation:

Saying "the daughter" twice is repitition and doesn't make the sentence flow smoothly.

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