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Are these acceptable transition phrases for a first-person POV story? And if not, can someone give me a replacement?

As I turned my head to the morning sky :
When evening approached :
I went to grab my shawl from my room :
I set out to the rose garden :
Finally, I reached the outskirts:

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Yes this is in first person POV
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