Question

changing the sentence structure and how quickly events unfold in a story can affect which literary element ​

Answer 1

Changing the sentence structure and how quickly the events unfold in a story will change the pace of the story. When we're changing the speed of how the story progresses from 10 page long descriptions of certain items and things to one page descriptions of a whole week going by, we dramatically influence the speed of the story and with that its pace.