Question

Can u help me figure out how to rewrite that email (punctuation,etc)

Answer 1

E-mail is a very formal form of communication so try not to use abbreviations.

1. Instead of 'bout' ,→ 'about'

2. And instead of 'See attachment',

you can write 'see the attachment' or you can also write 'You will find the attachment below'

3. Start the e-mail with a salutation

4. And end it with Yours truly/ Yours sincerely

5. Then write your name below that

Answer 2

Answer: first of all don't say bout. say about. Also list and be specific about what information you are trying to receive.