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The double theme in literature has always fascinated me because it is a common theme in everyone's daily life but at the same time, it is so difficult to express and represent concretely.
A novel where we can talk about it is a novel of the nineteenth century called The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mister Hyde written by Robert Louis Stevenson. It talks about a Doctor, Jekyll, who is a good man and is respected by everyone but one day he drinks a potion and he transforms into Mister Hyde, changing his physical appearance and becoming a horrible nocturnal murderer.
This work wants to demonstrate that in every man there is a good and a bad part, but not only because the two parts coexist and complement each other.

Answer 1

The double theme in literature has always fascinated me because it is a common theme in everyone's daily life, but at the same time, it is so difficult to be expressed and represented concretely.

A novel, which we can talk about, is a novel of the nineteenth century called The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mister Hyde, written by Robert Louis Stevenson. It talks about a Doctor, whose name is Jekyll, who is a good man and is respected by everyone. But one day he drinks a potion and transforms into Mister Hyde, changing his physical appearance and becoming a horrible nocturnal murderer.

This work aims to demonstrate that in every man there is a good and a bad part, but not only because the two parts coexist and complement each other.

Answer 2

The double theme in literature has always fascinated me because it is a common theme in everyone's daily life, but at the same time, it is so difficult to express and represent concretely. A novel where we can talk about it is a novel from the nineteenth century called The Strange Case of Dr. Jekyll and Mister Hyde, written by Robert Louis Stevenson. It talks about a doctor, Jekyll, who is a good man and is respected by everyone, but one day he drinks a potion and he transforms into Mister Hyde, changing his physical appearance and becoming a horrible nocturnal murderer. This work wants to demonstrate that in every man there is a good and a bad part, but not only because the two parts coexist and complement each other.

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