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Wassup Mrs. Lorenzo?

How is your day going? Mine is going great. I am sitting here in art class and am supposed to be working on a project, but I don't really want to. In fact, I don't really want to be in school. I hate school. My mom makes me go because she says classes like English are "important.” I'm all like "whatevs mom.” English is stoopid. Video games are where it’s at.

Anyway, I was looking online
and it looks like you messed up my grade. You need to change it back immediately or I will get in trouble. Can you explain this. Take care of this asap. Please and thx

can one of y’all help
me rewrite this

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Step-by-step explanation:

before I write it, I don't really know how formal you want this to be....but here's a formal one?

Dear Mrs Lorenzo,

I hope you're having a great day. I am currently in Art class and I should be working on a project, but I don't really want to. In fact, I don't really want to be in school because I don't enjoy it at all. My mother makes me go because classes such as English are "important", but I don't really agree. I don't see the point of English. I would much rather be playing video games.

I was looking online, and i realised that there seems to be an error with my grade. Could you please explain what has happened and correct it? Thank you very much.

Yours sincerely,

whatever your name is

I'm guessing that would be formal enough if it was a school teacher, but I'm surprised you're putting all of this "i hate school" stuff in a letter to your teacher? But hey, if only I could be that frank with my teachers lol

Hope this helped - stay strong through school lol it'll be over one day

User BarryPye
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Answer:

Step-by-step explanation:

Dear Mrs Lorenzo,

I hope this letter finds you well. I am currently in Art class and I should be working on a project, but I don't really want to. In fact, I don't really want to be in school because I don't enjoy it at all. My mother makes me go because classes such as English are "important", but I don't really agree. I don't see the point of English. I would much rather be playing video games.

I was looking online, and i realised that there seems to be an error with my grade. Could you please explain what has happened and correct it? Thank you very much.

P.S your my favorite teacher dont tell the others

User Moath Thawahreh
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