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Rewrite the following, eliminating extra words and combining short sentences into longer ones when necessary.

The first person that I met at the party was Cindy. Cindy was a blonde who had bright green eyes.

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At the park I met Cindy first, she was blonde and had bright green eyes. Hope this helps! :)
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