Question

Julie read To Kill a Mockingbird and Romeo and Juliet, the assigned literature for English and decided to write a short

narrative with a theme related to parental influence on children's lives.
Read the excerpt and answer the question. Click here to read Julie's "To the Beach
Stay tuned to this station for further reports that will update listeners to possible locations for this weather
system's landfall
Which edit would avoid repetition and make this sentence easier to understand?
This weather system has the possibility of coming ashore in several locations so keep listening to this station's weather reports for
further updates
How close this weather system will come to our Texas coast is uncertain so keep listening to this station for further reports, including
updates
Whether or not this weather system comes ashore along the Texas coast is yet to be reported. so stay tuned to this station for further
reports
Keep listening to this station for updated reports about where this weather system will possibly come ashore.
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Answer 1

So for the first part instead of "Stay tuned to this station for further reports that will update listeners to possible locations for this weather

system's landfall"

write: stay tuned.... *take out "that will update listeners to" and replace it with "on"

Step-by-step explanation: