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Technological innovations such as the internet, which proliferated at a pace seemingly unique in the 21st century, were in fact similar to the explosion of new technology during the industrial revolution that drastically changed life in analogous ways in the 18th century.

A) Technological innovations such as the internet, which proliferated at a pace seemingly unique in the 21st century, were in fact similar to the explosion of new technology during the industrial revolution that
B) The impact of technological innovations such as the internet, which proliferated in the 21st century at a pace that may seem unique, was similar to that of the explosion of new technology during the industrial revolution and
C) The pace at which technological innovations such as the internet have proliferated in the 21st century may seem unique, but it is similar to the industrial revolution’s new technology, which exploded and
D) The pace at which technological innovations such as the internet proliferated is seemingly unique in the 21st century, but the industrial revolution provided an explosion of new technology and
E) The pace at which technological innovations such as the internet have proliferated may seem unique to the 21st century, but the industrial revolution provided an explosion of new technology that

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The correct answer is the following.

It seems that there is no question here, just a series of statements.

Although there is no question included, we could assume that we have to choose the sentence best written. If that is the case, then the correct option is E) The pace at which technological innovations such as the internet have proliferated may seem unique to the 21st century, but the industrial revolution provided an explosion of new technology that

Among the other options, option E is more concrete, understandable, and specific. It does not need anything else. It starts correctly, refers to the modern technological innovations and set the example of the internet, and compare it with the case of the industrial revolution in which similar advances surged in that time, allowing the progress of nations.

The clearest, direct, and specific the sentence, the better to a correct understanding.

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