Question

Which phrase should be revise for a more parallel sentence? Pet canaries need large cages wouldn't parties some fresh water and keep out of cold

Answer 1

The phrase "keep out of cold" should be revised for a more parallel sentence.

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence "Pet canaries need large cages, wooden perches, some fresh water, and keep out of cold." is not parallel, because of the examples: large cages, wooden perches, some fresh water, and keep out of cold. The first three examples are parallel because they describe the things canaries need, and the last example is something they do not need. So, to make this sentence parallel, the last example needs to be "and kept warm" because "kept warm" will be something canaries need.

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Answer 2

Keep out of cold

Step-by-step explanation:

A phrase is a collection of words which holds a concept ad can be used as a unit in a sentence.

The phrase that should be revised for a more parallel sentence is "keep out of cold" because if others are blocked out, it wouldn't make a proper sentence as it would look something like, "pet canaries need keep out of cold".

Properly revising it would look like, "pet canaries need to be kept out of the cold"