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Please answer this correctly without making mistakes

Please answer this correctly without making mistakes-example-1

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Answer:

By simplifying a long, complicated sentence

Step-by-step explanation:

Some of the writer's sentences are long, with many commas. For more fluency, he can shorten these sentences by simplifying them.

Hope this helps!!

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