Question

Which revision makes the tone of the sentence appropriate for a formal e-mail? Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school. You know, you should consider paving over the area where we wait before school because it’s gross. Please note our awesome suggestion for paving over the gross area where we wait before school. Paving over that muddy area where students wait before school is obviously a smart plan.

Answer 1

Please review our suggestion for paving over the muddy area where students wait before school.

Step-by-step explanation:

This revision is the most formal and respectful. The second one is very forward and informal, the third one uses too many adjectives like awesome, which is not formal. The last one sounds okay until they use obviously, which is very forward and disrespectful.

Answer 2

its AAA

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