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Read the sentence. I am interested in drawing, painting, and make sculpture. Which is the best revision of the sentence?

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Answer:

The best revision is: "I am interested in drawing, painting, and making sculptures". You have to edit "make" into "making" as all the other actions in the sentence are verbs.

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