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Answer:

During those months, Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness - not pity, not obligation - as though Andy had become the son she always wanted.

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Answer:

Megan's mother looked after Andy during those months with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-as though Andy had become the son she always wanted.

Explanation.

The start of a sentence should be capitalized- the only capitalized word at the start of a phrase is 'Megan's'.

Megan's mother looked after Andy PREP

during those months.

The base sentence uses with as the preposition so-

Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness-

the (-) indicates an appositive so you need another - to close it.

Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-

Original sentence uses as.

Megan's mother looked after Andy with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-as though Andy had become the son

Fit in the last phrase and close the sentence with a period.

Megan's mother looked after Andy during those months with something close to genuine fondness- not pity, not obligation-as though Andy had become the son she always wanted.

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