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Read the sentence. The failing company was not going to succeed because it was bankrupt and did not have any money left. What is the best way to revise this sentence to eliminate wordiness?

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Answer:

C. The failing company was going bankrupt.

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User Rick Wolff
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take out the part that says “and did not have any money left” because it’s redundant.

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