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The daughter could not see far in front of her and continued to play with her fingers. Although the old woman

lived in this desolate spot with only her daughter and she had never seen Mr. Shiftlet before, she could tell,
even from a distance, that he was a tramp and no one to be afraid of. His left coat sleeve was folded up to
show there was only half an arm in it and his gaunt figure listed slightly to the side as if the breeze were
pushing him. He had on a black town suit and a brown felt hat that was turned up in the front and down in the
back and he carried a tin tool box by a handle. He came on, at an amble, up her road, his face turned toward
the sun which appeared to be balancing itself on the peak of a small mountain.
What technique does O'Connor use in the paragraph to create compelling characters?
1. detailed descriptions
2. vivid dialogue
3. multiple settings
4. believable motivations

User Vic Smith
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Answer:

1.

Step-by-step explanation:

O'connor talks in detail about everything and explains everything within words.

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Answer:

Detailed descriptions

Step-by-step explanation:

We know it cant be answer number two because this excerpt doesn't include dialogue, it isn't number three because it also doesn't include more than one setting, and it isn't four because the narrator doesn't show any motive and is only describing a man.

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