Question

Anita is editing her draft essay about a lion sanctuary she visited. She frowns at the following sentences:

"There were about 20 lions in the sanctuary. A lot of workers would take care of them. Sometimes, a few lions would try to escape."
Anita needs to edit her sentences for __________.



redundancy

grammatical errors

vague language

connotation

Answer 1

grammatical errors

Step-by-step explanation:

Grammatical error is a term used in prescriptive grammar to describe an instance of faulty, unconventional, or controversial usage, such as a ​misplaced modifier or an inappropriate verb tense. Also called a usage error. Compare grammatical error with correctness.