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Can you check my grammar and see if I need to add anything else. Here’s what I said. You know one of the reasons why I have moved so much is because people were always so rude to my dad because he had an accent. When he was working in NC, there was a client who said they wanted to have another person to talk to because he had an accent. My dad is easy to understand though, he doesn’t even have a heavy accent! My freshman year when I was in Texas as most of you are aware I am from. There was this girl who I went to school with who said she wouldn’t even talk to me because she thought I had accent which most of you know, I do not have an accent. She only said that because my dad is from Colombia. Immigrants matter, Black Lives Matter, LGBT Matters, People with autism matter and Women Matter! Everyone matters! Stay safe and be kind!

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