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the only thing is that instead of putting verano, so summer as the season, i'd put spring, so primavera because in spring, all the weather is mixed and in summer its mainly just hot and dry, not windy, nor rainy, at least thats how it is where i've lived, so in southern cali and AZ. Also, the last answer is domingo, not sabado, so sunday not saturday.
That's pretty much it except for some grammatical errors like words in english.