Question

Directions: Use the following sentences to form a coherent paragraph. The first one should be a topic sentence. Place a number beside the sentences to indicate the correct order form a coherent paragraph. For example, # 1 would be the topic sentence, #2 would be the second sentence in the paragraph, etc.You should receive an e-mail immediately that confirms your changes.Once you have made your changes, click "submit."The Annual Benefit Enrollment Period runs from October 8, 2014, through November 2, 2014.If you want to change your benefits enrollment, log in to the intranet and select "MyHR."After you are logged in, click the "current benefits link" to view your current health and dental plans.Then make any changes to your health and dental plans and update your personal information as required.However, all the changes you make will take effect on January 1, 2015

Answer 1

Answer: Please see explanation column for answer.

Explanation: To make the sentences form a coherent paragraph.

first, i listed the order the sentences should appear.

1.The Annual Benefits Enrollment period runs from October 8 ,2014 through November 2, 2014.

2.If you want to change your benefits enrollment, log in to the intranet and select "MyHR".

3.After you logged in, click the "current benefits link" to view your current health and dental plans.

4.Then make any changes to your health and dental plans and update your personal information as required.

5.Once you have made your changes, click "submit".

6.You should receive an email immediately that confirms your changes.

7. However, all the changes you make will take effect on January 1, 2015.

Secondly, i combined the sentences to form a coherent paragraph

The Annual Benefits Enrollment period runs from October 8 ,2014 through November 2, 2014. If you want to change your benefits enrollment, log in to the intranet and select "MyHR". After you logged in, click the "current benefits link" to view your current health and dental plans. Then make any changes to your health and dental plans and update your personal information as required. Once you have made your changes, click "submit", You should receive an email immediately that confirms your changes. However, all the changes you make will take effect on January 1, 2015.