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Which revision, if any, BEST improves meaning in the underlined portion in sentence 11?

Which revision, if any, BEST improves meaning in the underlined portion in sentence-example-1

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Answer:

(Leave as it is)

Step-by-step explanation:

The other answers don't really make grammatical sense. They put commas in the wrong spots. They other answers don't improve on the meaning of the underlined portion.

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