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Colonies in WWI. help out! if i should change things let me know what to add and take off.​

Colonies in WWI. help out! if i should change things let me know what to add and take-example-1
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What looks good:

The claim is strong and the evidence makes sense.

What needs work:

"because" is spelled incorrectly.

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