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HELP! Can someone please re phrase these sentences because I cannot think of another way to say what I mean and i keep repeating myself!!!

“I feel as though i have no right to speak directly on this subject because i did not personally experience the Holocaust.”

“As a society we cannot fully comprehend the mass destruction and loss during the time of WWII”

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"I feel as if I don't have the authority to talk openly on this subject because I was not present during the Holocaust."

"As a society, we are unable to properly appreciate the immense destruction and loss that occurred during WWII."

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