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Is this good what i did for the template???? but the thing is, i need help with the 1st question the 5th question and the 6th question if u can do that that would be great and give me tips thank you

Is this good what i did for the template???? but the thing is, i need help with the-example-1
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Answer:Ok so for the first paragraph u can hook the audience with an question that would make u wanna read the article or w.e u wanna call It and then u can answer the question for an example let say the story is about u getting lost u would say , Have u ever gotten lost with nobody by ur side? Well I have.U can’t put well I haven’t cause it wouldn’t make the reader want to read it.But now all u have to do is refer to that which is about the seperations of power.And then like it says introduce the event and the characters.

For the 5 question I don’t know either maybe ask your teacher but my stupid self would just do what it says and summarize all the paragraphs I wrote and review everything I wrote so far let meh stop I would ask the teacher that gave it to meh.

and for the reviewer suggestions i would say that I like ur second paragraph.But for your 3rd paragraph add 2 more sentences cause remember it’s supposed to be a paragraph, same thing for the 4th one.But ur doing good so far

I hope this helped

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