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Read the sentence. Our garden where we grow plants is filled with colorful red flowers like tulips and yellow flowers that are called daffodils. Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in

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Read the sentence.

Our garden where we grow plants is filled with colorful red flowers like tulips and yellow flowers that are called daffodils.

Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence?

Our garden, filled with plants, has colorful flowers, including red tulips and yellow daffodils.

Our garden is filled with red tulips and yellow daffodils.

Our garden where plants grow is filled with colorful flowers like tulips and daffodils that are red and yellow.

We grow flowers in our garden that are colorful like red tulips and yellow daffodils and it is filled with them.

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IanSR · Answer 1 · 2023-04-23T02:40:45+0000

Hey there!

Question:

Our garden where we grow plants is filled with colorful red flowers like tulips and yellow flowers that are called daffodils.

Correction:

Our garden, filled with plants, has colorful flowers, including red tulips and yellow daffodils.

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