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These sentences are too short and choppy; they need to be combined into one concise thought. Which sentence best does this task without changing the writer's original meaning?

A) One day I almost lost a small child at the airport; I was so scared.

B) My neighbor was at the airport one day and I was babysitting and I almost lost her kid.

C) Airports are scary places especially if you are babysitting your neighbor's two-year-old toddler.

Eliminate

D) My worst babysitting experience was the time I almost lost my neighbor's two-year-old toddler at the airport.

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Answer:

I'm not sure what the original sentence was, but option D makes the most sense to me.

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentence structure flows better.

I hope this helps!

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